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PostSubject: NEED HELP!   Tue Mar 13, 2012 10:21 am

i know, it's not complete in any way, but i'm wondering if i've got my perspective right?
two girls in a battle, the one in the centre is what i'm trying to work on to work with the girl behind her.
i'm trying to get both their perspectives to match each other but..i can't tell if it's working or not..

i'm new to this forum but would appreciate ANY help/critique

thanks in advance!
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PostSubject: Re: NEED HELP!   Tue Mar 13, 2012 12:54 pm

Ok... I've been staring at this image for a while now...
To me the 'perspective' of the two female characters seems ok for the moment.
The thing that is bugging me is the incomplete environment lines. The way the ground curves around the females messes with my head Razz
I dunno... perhaps the ground is meant to be uneven, but the way the females are placed on that slight angle suggests the frame is tilted to the left slighty and then the lines on the very left bring it back up again so to me it looks weird in that way.
But like you said it is incomplete.
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PostSubject: Re: NEED HELP!   Wed Mar 14, 2012 5:56 am

hey, thanks so much for helping me out with it! After sleeping on it, i realize it's not as dynamic of a piece than i wanted and changed it to this:

i'm so embarrased that i kinda wasted your time sorry! i just didn't start the drawing process right and created the characters before working out what i wanted to do, and was too stubborn to start all over again : (
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PostSubject: Re: NEED HELP!   Wed Mar 14, 2012 10:25 am

No worries... never really any time wasted.
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PostSubject: Re: NEED HELP!   Fri May 18, 2012 4:18 pm

sweet! so now my piece looks like this:
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What do you reckon?
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PostSubject: Re: NEED HELP!   Fri May 18, 2012 4:19 pm

woops. one too many.
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PostSubject: Re: NEED HELP!   Tue May 22, 2012 12:08 pm

This is looking good, view angle is nice.
It is unclear to me though as to whether the branches(?) at the top of the image are in the foreground or the background.
Also the level of detail could be somewhat more consistent to pull the image together.
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