NEED HELP!

i know, it's not complete in any way, but i'm wondering if i've got my perspective right?
two girls in a battle, the one in the centre is what i'm trying to work on to work with the girl behind her.
i'm trying to get both their perspectives to match each other but..i can't tell if it's working or not..

i'm new to this forum but would appreciate ANY help/critique

thanks in advance!

Ok... I've been staring at this image for a while now...
To me the 'perspective' of the two female characters seems ok for the moment.
The thing that is bugging me is the incomplete environment lines. The way the ground curves around the females messes with my head
I dunno... perhaps the ground is meant to be uneven, but the way the females are placed on that slight angle suggests the frame is tilted to the left slighty and then the lines on the very left bring it back up again so to me it looks weird in that way.
But like you said it is incomplete.

hey, thanks so much for helping me out with it! After sleeping on it, i realize it's not as dynamic of a piece than i wanted and changed it to this:

i'm so embarrased that i kinda wasted your time sorry! i just didn't start the drawing process right and created the characters before working out what i wanted to do, and was too stubborn to start all over again : (

No worries... never really any time wasted.

sweet! so now my piece looks like this:
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What do you reckon?

woops. one too many.

This is looking good, view angle is nice.
It is unclear to me though as to whether the branches(?) at the top of the image are in the foreground or the background.
Also the level of detail could be somewhat more consistent to pull the image together.